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Sky Command -Type 1- Episode 1 "False Diamond Age" Copyright
1999-2011
by
AllA Erawa Viacad
A strategic sci-fi trilogy chronicling World War 3 an epic
battle fought throughout the Sol System by the Western and
Eastern Blocks to gain control over enough elemental (703)
402-4375 resources to rule over humanity.
AllAViacad@GMail.com
PREVIEW FOR FALSE DIAMOND AGE
NARRATOR
self replicating nanotechnology,
Show nanobots.
NARRATOR (CONT'D)
the holy grail of civilization.
NARRATOR (CONT'D)
Humankind harnesses the revolution
and uses it to build great wonders.
To build a great utopia; without
aging, poverty, or disease, mankind
will relish in a golden age of
world wide prosperity,,,
Show star elevator earth and colonies, show a traditional
african tribe replicating a huge platter of sushi.
NARRATOR (CONT'D)
for a time. Then there is war,, and
all of civilization's achievements
hung in the balance.
Show star elevator explode, at the utterance of "war," people
begin to panic as it begins to shatter and come down almost
upon them.
Show quick flashes of the movie.
NARRATOR (CONT'D)
See the future, let it be your
present
Show diamonds being brought together by nanobots to build ->
"False Diamond Age"
NARRATOR (CONT'D)
Coming ___________
REFLECTION
Play a song like: "Robert Miles -
Everyday life."
Pure blackness. Credits come up of a certain Wavelength. The
wavelength is displayed in the lower left hand corner, by the
wavelength is the element and electron level drop. After each
credit is displayed for a moment, the letters spread out over
the screen, giving the screen a distinct color. To the right
is a spectrometer, which keeps track of the line of color.
Begin reflective narrative as beginning credits are displayed-
CUT TO:
INT. TRAIN
ZEUS (VO)
I have loved to play first person
shooters all my life. I was never
very interested in one subject, and
I didn't want to go to college
undecided like everybody else did,,
not when I knew my true passion. I
had joined the space marines.
ZEUS (VO)
I signed up just a couple of months
ago, claiming on the application my
interest in protecting our
civilization. Which is a load of
bullshit.
ZEUS (VO)
For the past few decades our world
has been peaceful, and prosperous.
The last evils of the world were
vanquished along with the
terrorists, the Iranians, and the
North Koreans.
ZEUS (VO)
Our military is the largest in the
world but is still less than 3
percent of the US population. It
outnumbers the EU coalition army by
(Reflection)
ZEUS (VO)
But none of that's important. I
joined for my own sake, to learn
discipline, and get paid playing
the simulators I love.
After all the credits are done, "False Diamond Age" is
displayed in white, and the holes in the spectrometer are
filled in, to the right is labeled all of the spectral
ranges. When this is blended into the screen, it becomes a
bright yellow/ orange color. Middle spreads out to fill the
whole screen. All you see is yellow/orange. Zoom out of the
sun, just a few degrees above the horizon quickly out to an
elevated super sonic maglev train, then move to the interior
where Zeus is sipping from a 50cl diamond bottle of sprite.
During below dialogue zoom into glass bottle to see
individual atoms of Carbon labeled 'C', and other elements
doped in. Zoom out to show perfect lattice structure only
broken by carbon nanotube reinforcements all the way through.
Zoom to macroscopic world.
ZEUS (VO)
Our world is so great, everything
is custom made to perfection, every
atom in alignment, everything made
cheaply and instantly.
During below dialogue zoom into video watch wrist band, zoom
all the way into the intelligent 3 dimensional hexagonal
SINSS circuitry, overlay circuit diagram, in all dimensions.
Zoom out and pan out, then show diagrams at logical level
which is big, zoom out to see more logic arrangements, then
the human level.
ZEUS (VO)
Given our control we design things
intelligently maximizing every bit
of spare space, expanding digital
circuitry to every cubic centimeter
of devices, even if it is not
needed at all.
During below dialogue A child sitting across from Zeus in the
isle seat is remote controlling a toy BiMAV in the isle. Zoom
into toy BiMAV to show coil launchers, zoom out to show SINSS
muscles pushing a layer of Hexagonal Metal muscular
architecture. Show many layers randomly arranged now
expanding. Zoom out to show Cellular Diamond Armor. Zoom out
to show toy BiMAV again.
(Reflection)
ZEUS (VO)
And given the ability to control
matter at the sub-microscopic level
or nanoscopic level, we can shape
materials at the macroscopic level
During below dialogue show Zeus looks out the window and sees
the shadow of a rod, on the dry ground.
ZEUS (VO)
and beyond to form colossal
wonders, that have transformed our
way of life in this solar system.
Show scenery, as the rod comes closer to the train. The train
is traveling very fast so things are flying by very very
fast.
FADE TO:
EXT. TRAIN STOP
Zeus looking down at the ground and looking over the railing
of the final train station. Turn camera to look at Zeus from
the same level as him, you can begin to see the elevator come
out of the square Pyramidal(same ratio as Great Pyramid)
space port, still see Zeus.
As he looks up at the "end" of it in the sky so do you, keep
looking up higher and higher, you can see the elevator go on
seemingly forever. Ultra-zoom to the very top, through a
window, where Zeus is getting off, having fun in zero gees.
CUT TO:
TRAINING
INT. BOOT CAMP MEETING ROOM
Zeus's first training program. All the male and female
candidates are standing conversing.
INSTRUCTOR
All right men, AT ATTENNNTION!!
This may not be boot camp, but we
still expect perfect discipline.
INSTRUCTOR
We are not swords to be sent into
some kind of full scale war that
will never happen, we are the ever
operating scalpel of the United
States Military, WE ARE DELTA
FORCE!!!!
INSTRUCTOR
You men and women have been chosen
above thousands to become part of
an elite experimental squadron Code
Name Seraphim. If we are successful
in our operations then we will be a
perfect model of all the special
forces corps, and possibly the
entire US military.
INSTRUCTOR
As y'all well know the future of
war is in tightly packed Bipedal
Mechanized Assault Vehicles or
BiMAVs, and Strength Enhancing
Exosceletons or STEX. A
micromanaged symphony of Supreme
Integrated Nanotubular Super
Structure or SINSS armor.
INSTRUCTOR
All of it is built by the self
replicating nanobot, SRN, the
microscopic cube that can turn heat
and nearby atoms into more cubes
just like the first 1. That's how
everything now is built, by filling
in the matter with cubes then
having the cubes eat each other to
make things.
(Training)
RANDOM SOLDIER AT BOOT CAMP
So the SRNs are cannibals.
INSTRUCTOR
Yes, they are computerized micro-
machines that sacrifice themselves
so that we can live in the comfort
of a society that need only press
buttons to make anything one's
heart desires. But you already knew
that.
INSTRUCTOR
There is a reason why this is a
gender balanced squadron, each and
every one of you is going to from
up with an opposite gender pair
that will be your permanent
assignment as a sky assistant and
commando team unless you want to
switch with other couples.
INSTRUCTOR
Women will usually be sky
assistants because they can
multitask all the mission variables
and men will be commandos because
men have a single minded focus, TO
KILL!!!
INSTRUCTOR
You are to love and fuck each other
so that your spirits can be in
perfect resonance. If this
resonance breaks trust also breaks,
and if trust breaks then ground
units and sky commanders will not
coordinate properly.
INSTRUCTOR
Remember Ground teams must not
hesitate to follow every single
word of their sky assistant. Those
on the ground see nothing, those in
the sky see everything.
INSTRUCTOR
Before mess hall meeting at 12
o'clock each and every one of you
is to have a partner or I'll choose
them for you.
(Training)
INSTRUCTOR
Welcome to the Seraphim boys and
girls were going to be doing some
fun stuff working with the CIA as
part of the new Securities Act.
Even our name is classified, so
don't speak it, if anybody asks
tell them only that you are in the
Space Marine Core. Dismissed.
Instructor promptly walks out of the room.
ARTEMIS
What's your name?
ZEUS
Zeus.
ARTEMIS
I am named after a greek goddess as
well.
ZEUS
Really which.
ARTEMIS
Artemis goddess of the hunt.
ZEUS
So is that why you joined the
Seraphim, to hunt.
ARTEMIS
Hell yeah. And I guess you'll just
send down lightning bolts from the
heavens to kill your enemies.
ZEUS
Damn strait girl.
ARTEMIS
Unfortunately your powers are
useless because the nanotubes
within the STEX would just conduct
the electrical current away from
the body.
ZEUS
That is why I want you to be
sending artillery, missiles, and
lasers at the enemy.
ARTEMIS
That's how I hunt.
(Training)
ZEUS
Ohh so you don't use a bow and
arrow.
ARTEMIS
Hahaha no fortunately we're a
little beyond that. Your funny and
somehow I think the fact we are
both greek gods makes us destined
to be together.
ZEUS
I've got that impression also.
ARTEMIS
So we'll be a team.
ZEUS
Yep your my sky assistant.
CUT TO:
INT. SKY COMMAND CENTER WITH VIRTUAL REALITY NODES AT THE
BOTTOM AROUND THE PERIMETER
Normal sky command with peripheral nodes devoted to VR
simulators for Zeus and his buddies.
INSTRUCTOR
Were starting you out hard people,
odds, remember keep your shields up
and all guns firing at aimed
targets, good luck.
The West has 20 BiMAVs managed by 20 commanders and 20 sky
assistants, they fights against 40 BiMAVs.
EXT. PLAZA IN TRAINING COLONY
INSTRUCTOR
All plaza units form up into a
turtle, ALL OTHER UNITS CONVERGE
IMMEDIATELY ON PLAZA!!
Plaza units pull together into a coherent shield formation
that blocks virtually all plasma shells but can still shoot
out of it.
The formation is being surrounded by most of the enemy STEX,
now pouring out of the buildings to pummel as much plasma as
they can against the virtually impenetrable turtle.
Units farther out from the Plaza are now running plowing
through any enemy resistance
(Training)
ZEUS
WE'RE GETTING FUCKING POUNDED OUT
HERE.
There is a breach in the shields and the surrounding forces
dump plasma on 3 of the central fighters beyond fighting
capacity, leaving 7 including Zeus, before the siege is
completely ended. The 3 dropped out of BiMAVs and remain in
mini-BiMAVs.
INSTRUCTOR
Turtled units drop shields hit the
deck now, ALL Units push into the
Plaza!!
The 7 in the center hit the deck still keeping the enemy at
bay and still firing sparingly at enemy BiMAVs in the plaza.
EXT. CITY IN TRAINING COLONY
All the other friendly units are flanking the enemy from all
angles and the assistant controlled STEX which are finally
arriving from the long trek on and through all the city
buildings.
EXT. PLAZA IN TRAINING COLONY
Finally the enemy forces seemed mostly destroyed. They are
being hit by dumped plasma on them as the BiMAVs ingest their
body parts directly into their stomach so it can be
liquified.
INSTRUCTOR
Alright just mopping and cleaning
up from here on out, eat every unit
in 5 minutes or you'll be in the
sim for extra hour.
Instructor leaves his command post and walks off.
CUT TO:
FOREST FIGHT
EXT. FOREST ON A NATURE COLONY
Zeus as a 11 year old is in forest camouflage. He and the
people he is killing are playing a MRDSS game(MultiRelay
Distance Sensor System, like laser tag except one can get hit
anywhere).
Perfectly calm and focused, Zeus presses his ear piece in to
listen, with his right hand. No emotion look strait forward
in concentration.
Zeus begins stalking, looks at enemy encampment through
scope. Zeus gets a little closer. As he stands up and begins
firing his riffle, transition by a cut to Zeus in a chameleon
STEX suit in-
EXT. PARK IN TYPE 2 COLONY
Begins firing. Kills a few of the enemy STEX. Runs out of the
forest, into a whole bunch of guys.
Zeus instantly throws a grenade and begins firing like crazy.
Zeus is sniped in the lower chest. Zeus stumbles back a few
steps as he waves his riffle to regain balance. Zeus is shot
again in the chest, he is laying on the ground, Zeus is shot
in the head.
ZOOM OUT FROM
THE SCREEN:
INT. SIMULATOR ROOM
TRAINER
Those are some nice shots Jeffrey
but you need to get those shots
more consecutive, he almost had
enough time to regain his balance.
JEFFREY
I know, I fumbled for a second
there.
TRAINER
Zeus why the hell did you run out
into the open like that, there was
absolutely no intelligence on enemy
positions when you did.
(Forest Fight)
TRAINER
You defiantly screwed up, you had
more than enough time to deploy
recon probes to scan the area like
that, it's just plain sloppy to
just run into the open like that.
By now you should know better than
that.
ZEUS
I'm sorry, I got so involved in
that John Wayne shit from the
forest, I got the impression I was
invincible.
TRAINER
You were great in the forest, but
overall we need more work with this
colony structure, you don't all
seem to be acquainted with it.
TRAINER
Remember this colony design is more
popular than any other design. It
is really going to help to know it
like the back of our hands. Which
is why I am going to run you
through the simulators again.
Moans of agony.
TRAINER
It's past our bedtime people, but
still I expect quality performance,
this will be a test of your
endurance, given that we have been
at the simulators for over 13
hours, you will start to get tired.
No more sloppiness. To your
simulators.
Zeus and the 19 other recruits go back into their virtual
reality nodes as they close around them.
ZOOM IN ON THE BLACKNESS THEN CUT TO:
FIRST LOVE
INT. DORM
ARTEMIS
Thank god all those missions are
over, as much as I like virtual
reality being at boot camp gets
boring.
ZEUS
But the days are dull so the nights
with you are more extraordinary.
ARTEMIS
I know I'm that good but you..
ZEUS
Well aren't I.
ARTEMIS
Well all though we are falling in
love, I wouldn't say we are in
love.
ZEUS
I would disagree we're just 68
percent in love.
ARTEMIS
Fair enough, I'm 43 percent in
love. I'll have sex at anywhere
above 33 percent so your in the
green.
Zeus smiles then starts making out with Artemis.
Sex scene.
CUT TO:
INT. SPACE PORT
Zeus is looking at his labtop which shows a video of Titan.
TITAN
Very basic mission, just gauge what
you think and if you have any
questions please write them down.
(First Love)
TITAN
This will also be a test of your
composure, remember you need to
master an entire new environment,
and do what little is required of
you perfectly. Your test begins
now, read the automatic briefing
CUT TO:
THE FIRST "TEST"
Zeus's labtop screen is filled with the following text. Titan
is saying it.
LABTOP
Your new name is ______ _______,
you are the substitute security
guard for ______ ______ who broke
his arm yesterday and is in the
hospital right now getting it
fixed. Here is your new face. You
are to report to the freight
department at FedEx Corp.
LABTOP
They will assign you to security on
the ________ a medium sized
transport departing for ________
colony. You are to wait on the ship
for exactly 30 minutes, and then
kill the crew and take control of
the cockpit. You are to connect
this via USB7 to the control panel.
FADE OUT THEN
CUT TO:
INT. FEDEX SHIP
RANDOM FEDEX EMPLOYEE 1
Hello _____
Zeus starts killing the crew.
After the crew is dead Zeus goes into the cockpit-
INT. COCKPIT OF FEDEX SHIP
and interfaces the computer. Zeus programs the burns
referencing his palm pilot. Zeus plugs in the palm pilot to
disable automatic controls.The burns take a few seconds.
Directly after it is completed a military officer shows up on
the screen-
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
By your current course you are
going to intersect with the
restricted elevator space, please
change your trajectory.
(The first "test")
Zeus looking down at writing on his arm next to the camera
viewing Zeus.
ZEUS
I am ________ _________ security
officer for this ship a terrorist
just took over the ship and
programmed this trajectory, he
smashed the manual controls. I just
killed him and sat down. I was
hoping you could fire a shell at
this ship to knock it off course
from the elevator.
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
That won't be necessary your
current trajectory will miss the
elevator by over 100M.
ZEUS
Oh thank god!
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
I am sending a tug boat to
intercept you, unfortunately it
will take almost 4 minutes for them
to reach your velocities, and
acceleration.
ZEUS
Thank you, but won't my thrusters
burn out before then.
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
No they will probably hold, ships
aren't made like they are used to.
Just sit tight, I will retain an
open com with you.
ZEUS
OK.
A few seconds later the ship starts to take the second turn.
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
Your ship has just made an
adjustment in its trajectory. I
thought you said the control panel
was destroyed.
A siren starts to go off in the command center.
(The first "test")
COMMAND CENTER COMPUTER
EMERGENCY, EMERGENCY, Collision
course scrambling all emergency
space craft. Preparing all rail
cannons. Calculating all courses of
action.
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
Fire Rail Cannons.
Zeus looking down at writing on his arm next to the camera.
ZEUS
I am Adam McMahon of the Total
Liberty Front. I will take down the
eastern elevator and my brothers
will destroy the western one.
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
YOU FUCKING CRAZY BASTARD, WHY!?
Show line of shot from both ground and sky station.
EASTERN ENSIGN
Sir no course of action could avert
the collision. Stopping inward
transportation.
EASTERN MILITARY OFFICER
WHY!?
ZEUS
See the tapes on the news at
midnight. Farewell I have a pod to
catch.
Zeus reaches the pod and launch it before the collision.
Zeus use a monitor on the pod to program a course to earth.
Then Zeus changes the monitor to display CNN news just as
they show the clip of the ship collide into the star
elevator. Then watch the clip show a picture of Zeus, until
Zeus takes the mask of the face of the fake terrorist off and
strips into civilian clothing fit for outdoor activity. Zeus
keeps the mask in his pocket The pod is reentering earth's
atmosphere and fire engulfs the pod. The pod is still making
course adjustments so that it will fall in the Ogooue river.
The pod's parachute opens as it is just above the Ogooue
river in central Gabon. Zeus's pod slams into the water.
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